All Comments on 'Kissing Cousins'

i wish i was them...

The story was very nice but who the hell is bob someone forgot the story line while writing it.

OK but not exciting. Keep on writing.

.... since there was no mention of Edy cleaning her hands between applying the 'Ointement' and taking firm hold of the protagonist's cock, one can only hope that it was NOT Vicks brand. Though I suppose some folks might find it 'stimulating', I'm afraid I'm not one of them. Can I get an "OWWWW" from the audience?

im i the only one who didnt like th fact it ends badly with him fingerin em

It seemed he went from an innocent virgin to overly knowledgeable too quick. Slow it down a bit and give the poor little lad a bit more innocence. Also the proofreading wouldn't have allowed Bob to suddenly appear.

i like that edy only fucks paul