All Comments on 'Kita'thalla Ch. 02'

A nice pace to this. Looking forward to the next chapter.

for getting this second chapter out so fast, from reading the comments on the first chapter I am NOT the only one that was waiting on it with bated breathes. so please dont take forever with the next one, PLEASE??

taking what you have so far out this will be one HECK of a good story as I said before so please keep on until the end

Great story! Love the pace as well. You have a great series started.

Chapter deux didn't disappoint! Love the verbal sparring!

This is going to be a great story. i can not wait for more thank you for writing it.

Thank u! Seatle USA

Looking forward to more; interesting perspective on inter-species attraction. So much for the detachment of medical professionals.....LOL!

Truly awesome work again. Connor and the cat-girl have great chemistry, and hopefully it will get even better!

As the kitty said.. "mmooree, mmmorre,mmooore!" Well written and thought out. Please continue...:)

I am very much enjoying your story so far, and look forward to forthcoming chapters, well done. Hopefully no one is giving you grief about there not being no immediate action, for myself I find your build up quite a refreshing change of pace from the majority of the stories here. Thankyou for sharing the story with everyone.

I find myself enjoying this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter. It is a very interesting concept this story is taking and I am very intreated by the possibilities. Keep up the wonderful work.

So far so good. I can easily image the scenery and find myself wondering why would military intelligence want to know about mens attraction to mammary glands... then again after all the other wacky weapons in history (breasts among them) I see why.

Going good

I really can't resist asking, being a diehard scifi fan myself, but how do they speak the same language? ;P

I mean really, you're actually gonna go there?

STFU

They aren't speaking the same bloody language! They both bloody have Universal Translator implants! Happy now?!? ;)

"I NEED TO RELIEVE MYSELF!" she finally yelled at him, her patience snapping. "I DON'T KNOW HOW IT IS FOR YOU HUMANS, BUT FOR US, PISSING IS NOT A COMMUNAL ACTIVITY!"

Eric put on his sunglasses: "I'll be back" as he walks off into the bush.

That said; your story is very good if not great; the Female of your alien breed is stronger more like strong Instintive smart primative Kizinrettes pre space age and like those female cat species of earth . In Larry Nivens, Kizinti male dominant world of space; Kizinti females were bred to be weak themselves and stupid; just breeders of strong male Kits, Not female warriors.

Awesome Sauce!

Hope this actually goes somewhere.

You’d think that, in the centuries to come, man would have finally discovered the cure for boobs.

he will need to make a litter box

Hate every damn story in this place always had bumbling idiot. “Oh I see a female, I just lost all my IQ. Duh hhhhhi. Hhhhooowww yyy you ddoooddooing?” Don’t have to be James Bond type but damn.

Great!

Great read with good characters, his attentiveness to her wanting privacy is funny.

Great work, voted five.