All Comments on 'Kita'thalla Ch. 09'

This story is great, i just hope we wont be waiting so long between chapters since it's summer time.

Awww!

C'MON!!

You soooo SUCK!! LOL!

I'm loving this story, thanks!

oh yeah.. you are mean.. leaving us on a cliffhanger.. please continue your story soon.. love your series.. it been wonderful..

and still too long a wait. Cliffhangers aren't fun when you don't build up to them and when you know you have to wait a long time to continue the story. While I enjoy the story, I wish I had waited for the to be complete before reading. The waiting and the short chapters are painful, to say the least.

More soon I hope

Don't worry, you won't have to wait a month for this one, the next installment is half written already. Thanks for all the support everyone! Makes it easier for me to write.

This is a great ride thank you vert much

been waiting for this installment

Can't wait for the next installment. Seriously, hurry up.

This seems more of a transition chapter, with no particular eroticism. It did end on an interesting note and we got to know more about Kita's background.

I do hope we'll get to see more intimacy and sexual tension. Sooner or later Eric and Kita must run out of excuses not to go at it for real.

I agree with others that this is a transition chapter . . and cliffhanger endings just make it even more worth the wait for the next chapter . . this chapt had lots of great backstory in it, and that in itself made it a great read . . . looking forward to the next chapt

hurry it up we cant wait a month for one new piece

Hate waiting, especially for a story this good.

Great work, as usual; I like the back story, and the hint of a third character being added to the cast certainly has my curiosity piqued. I missed the more intense and in-depth interactions which took the forefront of previous chapters, but I can't expect you to do EVERYTHING in one chapter. After all, seeing how Kita interacts in the presence of one of her own kind is bound to make the whole dynamic deliciously complex.

now that is very interesting . . she meets one of her own . . and is taking aim like she is going to kill them................. yes looking forward to the next chapter :-)

Just found this story and read it all in one sitting! Couldn't stop. Please get the next one up asap because this is great!.

Great story, keep it coming! I found this earlier this evening and read it straight through and I've enjoyed it thoroughly.

Thank you!

wheres the other 1 this is awsome

Next chapter is in final stages of being editted, will be submitted soon.

one of the best stories on the site, in my opinion. would make a great novel.

Yes it would make for an interesting novel and would be like "Enemy Mine" and numorous other stories or tv episodes with two enemies forced to work together to survive. This one involves a mal and female though which is a bit different as most of the others the two characters are both male or asexual.

This story is still going well, might want to mix it up a little and involve them being found by one of the factions and how they both deal with it. Just food for thought, always go with your own story idea before accepting "help" though, keeps the audience guessing.

"Here today, gone tomorrow"

This should be an anime... with a hentai ova/sequal.

That was really, really mean! *pouting*

That's cold dude just plain old dead ice cold

i am sending my necrid army after you they are hungry for authors tha leave me on cliffhangers

Hell, I loved that you laughed at leaving us hanging, hehe! ...oh wait, I'm reading this in a Tardis, I'll just spin this dial and push this button an....d there! The future is now, lots more chapters to read! ;)

...anyway, really fun story so far, though I am getting antsy for the guy to get a little kitty, er pu...ahem ;)

You said it buster

Exciiiiitingggg !!!!!!

Anther great chapter, five stars.