by johnnieblue44
I hope it is not another year in between chapters.........
Makes me want to go into the resturant business! Please don't wait too long for the next instalment.
This is a Hot story. Don't stop now. Can't wait for chapter 3.
Great 2nd chapter. Hope to read chapter 3 very soon. Don't leave it to long. Great writing.
I really liked your story and found your writing style very refreshing and a rather nice change of pace from the wham bam thankyou mam writing style. I can only hope that you retain the same repartee between the main characters. I can only hope that things get even more intense and erotic in the next chapter. I've realized that I've got a thing for Brunettes. On another note, I ran across your Frantic City Gang Bang and initially I thought it was about the Flintstones, but to my disappointment it wasn't.
When is the next story coming. This needs a great continuation into that fine ass you described and then left us hanging.
where are the next 3-4 chapters? You promised.....
This is one lucky guy. 10 -1 he gets more than the weather and mom; he will pop a virgin when this young gal senses he is about to cheat on her. What a stud, and mom can't find any other way to keep her daughter chaste. Yet, little virgin girl just might have to find a class mate to bust her red bubble. Waiting on next chapter.
Daughter Mother and smoking hót Weather lady. How lucky can some guys be. One to suck him over and over and the other two to give there bodies to him completely in my favorites. 5 Stars Plus
When is the follow up story coming¿
Ron
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What the Fuck !!!! To end this without
following thru with CYNTHIA Just to say
" to be continued". And nothing ???
Sucks dude
Absolutely love your writing! Been waiting for 9 years for the sequel, can’t wait to see where you take this...
Great story! There needs to be a follow-up to this. Anxiously waiting to read the continuation of this story. 5⭐