All Comments on 'Kiwi Rejuvenation for Film Star'

A Fine story but it needed a little more proof-reading. Good action and some humor added for good measure.

Though i did wish it was longer...

great story, i would love to be in her place.

Bloody brilliant mate, your average Kiwi guy having fun, keep up the good work

This story about Harry and Maggie was very tongue 'n cheek or where ever he could put it at the time !