by Nathon_88
Indeed you have left the story 'hanging'
you really should try to add at least a 'closing' to it.
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Really is great just kind of left unfinished would love a few mire chapters.
Awesome character you have there. Wish more knights were like him. More please!!!
Sorry but this seems rather cheesy. Yes, there are the people who do Rennaissance Festival and play all those sorts of games, but their dialogue is a lot more approachable than this. I'd say this is the end of the story. If an author does not submit the next chapter of a story within a month or two of the last one, it's highly unlikely that they ever finish.
Hey I really like the first 2 chapters so please keep going with it...
Hey I really like the first 2 chapters so please keep going with it...
The title says it all. When we get the next installment? Soon, I would hope.
One and two were great. So thanks for them.
J.
Wow...nothing like i normally read but it blew me away with the tenderness and the roughness both at the same time,i can not wait to read on...please say you will continue writing on this one...repectfully
It's a great story. I wonder what happened in John's past, but it's nice to see a strong, nice guy, instead of a wimp. Please keep writing them like this.
Please hurry, as much as You can, with the promised 3rd chapter. Of course everyone has a life to live too, so I'll try to be patient
John