All Comments on 'Knocking Down Destiny's Door Ch. 01'

Love your story, keep um writing. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

My title says it all; Great! Great! Great!

to me it was sort of boring didn't seem like there was any real love or affection.

This story was all over the place and was hard to fixate on the gist of it all.

This story wasn't all over the place at all, nor was it boring or lacking in love and affection. It's a tale of red hot, very hard motherfucking, with a friend witnessing the act and becoming aroused by it. Colleen will be offering her cunt to Brennan soon enough for some of the same! A first class story.

Now that Colleen knows all of the facts about her friend, what is she going to do?

Nicely written and edited, and smooth reading.

Thanks for the read.

You need to work with an editor for your laughable spelling and to tighten the flow. I'm going to check out Ch 02 and see where this goes - in terms of writing style. We all know where the story is headed. I don't mind an extra guest mom but if it starts to involve a whole swarm of folks, I'm out.

As an avid reader of mutually consensual incestuous love stories, especially between mother and son, I find this story interesting because it is the first one I have read which involves an independent, non-related third party. In real life, it would be interesting to find out how mentally and emotionally mature the individuals would be. Likewise, it would be interesting to see how solid the ego, sense of self, and id each person has.