by canitbethatlong
Your story was very amusing and delightful. It made me laugh out loud in certain places and was very erotic. I enjoyed the gently self deprecating humour and also the beautiful precision of teen aged memories and perceptions. THe very old man of twenty-eight was hilarious. Thank you for sharing this.
You have written quite possibly the best thing of it's kind on Literotica. And I only hold back because I haven't read all the others so it's possible there's a better one. But I doubt it.
Wonderfully true characters, intensely erotic sex, and s sense of freshness and reality. Is it really true? It certainly seems it could be. (And if it is true, is your other one with the same character - It Was Only Chloe - also true. It also is brilliant and has wonderful characters.)