All Comments on 'Kristina's Punishment'

by MadamLeMorte

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perl10perl10about 12 years ago
Promising First Story

Not great, but a good start. Nothing like a good spanking to bring out the inner slut in almost all women. When you can learn to demonstrate in your stories why this is so, then they'll be great. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Barely NonConsent

This story shouldn't be in the NonConsent tag, she barely even put up a fight nor was she reluctant in any way she may have been scared for like 5 minutes but she totally want him after that and didn't say anything to make him think otherwise. Don't get me wrong though, I liked you story, but it's just in the wrong place. And you need to add more detail and make it a little longer. But it was good-ish story.

Thanks For Writing It–

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