by Blulady
Although for some reason, I thought the murderer had been found at some point. I'll have to go back and re-read. Great yarn! Keep it up. (And yes, you probably are driving those who are looking for steamy sex and nothing but sex - away but so what? This is a great story!)
i like where this is going but please if or should i say when the creep shows up dont let anyone get killed (except maybe him) it would hurt the story because all the people in this are part of the fabric of the story. just a thought. "jakk"
Please continue soon with your story... I just love how it keeps on evolving and am keen to find out more!