by ktmccoll
I like very much. Your style is very sophisticated, and true-to-life. Reminds me of Stephen King (that's a huge compliment, by the way, I LOVE the King). Non Human stories aren't really my thing, but I think I'll read yours. ; )
Could not make much 'head' or 'tail' of it but it was short, sweet, humorous and dreamlike.
Great writing! I loved it! The humor and conversation you've put together is unmatched on Literotica. I'll be reading all your stories and look forward to your next one.
k, I congrat you for your cleverness of plot, your believable characters and the very clever ambiguity of your ending.
I love it! A mysterious and titillating zipless fuck. The ending was sublime--no sense of finality, but questions left hanging that were full of hope.
The '...no atheist chickens in the abattoir' cracked me up.
Thank you for your excellent imagery and superb skills!
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