by milordrevan
All your readers will be looking forward to your future posts.
Thank you for a story that is both sensitive and well written. I hope your real life experience is or the same high quality as your story.
jim
oh I love the beautiful girl with the average guy! its more realistic and besides average guys make the best lovers! they worship a beautiful girl's body like she is a goddess! :D
It's only the beginning, I liked this story, I think you should keep writing, and try to write more of these, but also with more meaning or passion, something that messes with the audiences emotions too, I also liked how this story is relatable to most average guys, keep on writing and think BIGger;)
I hope there's a sequel to this. Your build-up to the climax, pardon the pun, was perfect.