by Nigel Debonnaire
Wow that was really Excellently Written aside from a few Grammar Errors Hare and there but Nothing That can't be forgiven. At least it's Better Written than most on this site. Also I loved where took this Story, to be honest I thought it might haven gone a deferent direction very deferent direction.
It's erotic, it's romantic. couldn't be better.
I liked this story but I would hope sometime you write a story where the vampire doesn't want to kill himself I find the vampyres like Louis from interview with the vampyre are annoying in their whining and lamenting.
I wish you were letting us vote on this one, it was truly beautiful even in a creepy and vampiric way. Your writing has grace and sensualism even during a beating. I'm very impressed and hope to see a lot more of your work.
That was wonderfully written, absolutely perfect!! Thank you very much!!