All Comments on 'Late Flowering'

Well written story travelling along an unusual story line.

Good stuff and an actual story about a husband and wife - very rare for Literotica!

Weird. Fanciful. Well written. Adequately discussed the respective feelings, and changes in feelings. Not very erotic, but a good "read"

This may have a possible OK story line, but you desperately need an editor. There were six glaring errors in the first three paragraphs. I had to stop reading.

A read.

Perhaps anon you could let me know what the glaring errors were, I can't revisit/revise if I don't know what you're referring to.

Thanks

HunterShambles