All Comments on 'Late Night Coffee Break'

Hot enough to bring on the "willing suspension of disbelief." Nice dirty touches, cute meeting, nice characters.

Lisa, your writing is better than most on Lit anymore. I love "Kim" and her reactions as things get hotter and hotter, touching on several of my own fetishes without becoming overly fetishistic. Oddly, I have a friend named Kim who recently spent a long, hot week in her first girl/girl relationship and came out of it with a smile and lots of bite marks. That's what attracted me to your story. What sold it was your amazing way with words. Thanks for getting my morning off to a good start!

Well...maybe once hehe. Lisa, you are just like the song; too hot...too hot, babyyy. Winkz.

Lisa I can't begin to get enough of your stories..They are such a turn on..I have several lesbian friends whom would really enjoy reading your stuff..By the way I'm a man

loved ur story, it is the way i would have loved to be on the receiving end of that love making. the anal scenes were extremely hot and wish i could do that with my partner. i am a male and would love to be touched and touch the same ways as the charaters in your story .. verrrrrrryyyyyyyyy sexy...

..i am not. That was a really sexy story and I am now going to arse fuck my lover til she pleads for me to stop! Then she can do me in the style of those red hot lovers. Damn, it's great being a lesbian. Thanks for the amazing story. Sofi xxxx

Wow, more please

Loved your story - very hot, very wet, very wonderful! More please xx

love your work. Bill

AS usual from you, very well written. Love your stories, my problem is stopping after I start on your writings. I usually read the whole series like they were book.

And for a short, bang-bang story, still developed a feel for the characters.

Would love to see a longer story about these two, learn more about them.

Wish it was longer or a second part to come out. So damn sexy!!!

Hot and sexy little tale.

We need a sequel to this tale or a second chapter please. You can't leave us here now that these two girls had found each other.

Please! More! I love this story so much 💕Strangers, sharing anal pleasures, tastes and scents of that taboo erogenous zone. This story really is sooo hot and sexy it deserves more chapters! Please?

The more im reading about sapphic love, the more im getting the message men or a man is not really able to fill a womans desire .... Fortunately sapphic love can fill this void and bringing joy into the nights activities ...... ☺️

what a wonderful story. I loved it and gave it 5 stars. Jeanie was so kind and loving with Kim's first time with another woman. Kim's body responded to her unlike she ever responded to a man. This was such a beautiful story. i really loved it.

Manhating story after manhating story. Get help for your trauma.

What a great story with hot sex! 5 stars.

A great story, plus you’ve given me some key pointers for my own writing. Thanks for both a great story and a free writing lesson!