All Comments on 'Laura Ch. 02'

Excellently written. I can't wait to see what happens next and for Robert to get what's coming to him. The only ones I don't feel sorry for are Robert and the young girl. However, she'll find out the truth soon enough. Let's hope it's not too late. Thanks for sharing.

You my friend are a great writer and I cannot wait for the next chapter, oh and i hope Robert gets shot on-site with a Tech Nine and an arrow to the balls

You have written another beautiful chapter in the series. I like how you have shown an interesting side of Chris and Trish. I like how you have introduced Chris to Laura and how they have become somewhat friends now. I can hardly wait to see her leave husband Robert and start her new life. I can hardly wait to see what you do in the next chapter to twist things around between Laura and Chris.

I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter, but this chapter is even better. I like the way you are developing the characters. One begins to dislike Robert, understand Laura's desire to leave him, and Chris' feelings for Laura and how well he treats Tricia. The story is unfolding and I can't wait to read chapter 3.