All Comments on 'Laura's Vineyard'

best story i have ever read ... thank you

I have read a lot of wonderful stories but thios one outshines them all, Thank you for a story about love not just sex, It had me in tears, but thats ok, I am an old Irish romantic . Please do not stop writing stories that are so beautiful and full of love.

Incredible! 5 stars only because you cant give 6!

It was one of the best short stories I have ever read. It was gentle and kind and showed love, the kind that, like Tommy Dorsey's music, is rarely experienced any more. Thank you

This was a lovely story, very moving. You're a great story teller.

excellent tender, respectful and loving story

(I clicked the wrong star, so sorry)

you made me cry with this one. thanks for a wonderful story

Its a well crafted story, but the bees buzzing in the vineyard at flowering bother me a bit as the grapes shure don't need bees for pollination. Grapes as a species predate bees considerably , anyhow perhaps we should put it down to artistic license and just enjoy the offering.

A great well written story

The best story I've read on this site. Truly wonderful.

This by far,is the best story I have read on here. Beautifully written and expressed.

This is the second time I have read the story, and like the first time, it brought tears to my eyes, and I am a 59 year old retired Marine! Thank you for your gift, your story is one of the best I have read.

A very touching story.

Fantastic story. But why do all the really good authors stop writing. Need more from you.

Brought many tears to my eyes. Thank you for the read. Jim Sorry I am anon

This is one of the best stories I have ever read! Very classy and elegant. Please give us more wonderful stories like this! Thank you for your wonderful words!

PAT

In Tennessee

This is one of the best stories I have ever read! Very classy and elegant. Please give us more wonderful stories like this! Thank you for your wonderful words!

This story gave me a hard-on after some time and then later brought tears to my eyes as I read Laura's letter to Terry. Someone should make a movie out of this.

Enjoyed this very mucb. One of the best I've read. Keep up the great work.

Best I have read. Excellent!

Jay

Good read very enjoyable

This is an incredible love story that made me glad to have read it. Thank you for putting together what is arguably the best story I've read on this site.

I came here for something erotic, but instead I was given a story which was truly beautiful.

Thank you very much!

brought tears to my eyes.fantastic.you can really write.

Lovely. Simply lovely. To try to say anything else just wouldn't be right, except this. I've read a lot of stories on this website, and 99% of them lack any heart or soul. This one didn't. Lovely. Simply lovely! Thank you.

I really enjoyed this story. I got lost in it and was sorry to have it end. Keep up the good work.

I've never before read a story on literotica or anywhere else that left me feeling as I do now. During your story I felt the heat of desire spread through my body, wiped tears from my eyes, and rubbed at the goosebumps that ran like wild fire down my arms. Your story is incredible and so very believable. I want it to be true. The characters are developed, and real and I loved the tender undertones of your words. Thank you so much for writing this story. I'll look for more from you.

This is a wonderful and touching story that reaches to the very core of my being. The characters are REAL and the emotions, that are so subtly expressed, evoke a longing and tenderness that brings a smile to my face and leaves a warmth in my heart.

This story is as close to perfect as it can be!

BKS

I am in the process of starting my own vineyard in nc and greatly enjoyed this story. One of the best.

Not often you read as well a written piece as this one. Genuinely moving, the sex was incidental to the story. Great.

A tender and sensuous story, much better than those with all the lurid details

Beautiful story line Sex about right for the plot!!! No Need for more

Great!! Hope more stories come in future

i too found what one could call my first love from a older woman when i was 17 years old, thats been 60 years ago, why its hard to explain the memories are still with in me. a very wonderful story, and i would say a sexy story.

not enough sex. only one steamy scene shame they didnt do it again. also not much detail in that scene. still a very moving story thank you.

Amanda

WOWOWOWOW!!!!!!!!!

That was such a touching story. Really liked it.

beautiful story. love it.

I'm a senior retired engineer & have tasted many fine wines & many fine women. Your story is great. Bill

Thank you for a lovely story! You filled me with a warmth far different from what I expected on Literotica, for which I'm very appreciative.

Just as so many others have said, it's still a great story every time I read it.

I thought when I saw the title on the list that I recognized it.

I was right.

I had to read it again.

It was still as great as I thought after reading it years ago.

Apparently there are many others who felt the same way.

God bless ! ! ! !

I have to say, that after reading many stories over the years, this one has to be the best of the best....

Thank You for the love shown in this beautiful story!!!!!!

This is one of the best stories I read on this site.

It brought a couple tears to the eyes.

Good Work.

This is the most complete story I have read on this site. Truly an exceptional piece of writing.

I am 73 and know I am coming to my end but is great to know there are people out there that can still bring tears to my eyes with their writing !

once in a while there is a story

once in a while there is a strory teller

which reaches out and grabs me by the heart strings

which makes my heart sing and my teary eyes sting

such is this

My wife and I also shared this dream until she was taken from me, bought a few tears and so many happy memories.

It is an amazing story. Being as short as it is, it generated really powerful emotions. I could almost watch, hear and smell people milling about Laura's vineyard. Hats off !

Done just right! You not only pulled our heart strings, but made music at the same time. Thank you!

I'm a 26 yr old former Marine, and I actually shed a few tears.

A very beautiful story, thank you.

this story is beautiful , has my emotions on high , i loved reading every word, thank you for the beautiful story , thank you for writing something beautiful ,

Awesome story, very touching, it made me cry. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Wow! you are wonderfully sensitive and sensual writer. There is the magic of close and exciting relationships contained in your words with just the right amount of suggestive romance between the characters. Look forward to seeing more of your work. Awesome.

I do love Literotica stories. This one is just out of the box. The subtlety of the relationship, the love between 2 people who are so different and the build up of friendship/love between them. You baught tears to my eyes.

Beautiful work of writing

Great job, I loved your story, very impressed!

Love this. Keep writing. This brought tears to my eyes.

u r blessed as a writer. all i can say is wow, and please keep writing.

I have now read the story four times and each time, my eyes water up as I read the last page.

I was surprised to see a story like this in Erotic Literature, but I am glad I found it.

Great story.

I read this story 3 years ago and I found it again. As others have said, it is a wonderful and titillating read.

I love to read and this is just one off the diverse types and styles of literature that interests me, but the story touched my heart as I have met and worked with people who were more than what they appeared on the outside. Given a little attention and love a rose will appear above the thorns. Good work.

What a fantastic story.truly beautiful and erotic.

This is the absolutely most beautiful story I've ever read...(sniff, sniff)...:D

Very nicely written. The best I've read on this site. Excellent job.

I come back to this story every year or so and every time I am struck by how good it is and how it touches me. I think it is simply the best story on this site and there are some astonishingly good stories here. If you are reading this comment, thanks once again.

Great story. I realy enjoyed it as it brought tears to my eyes at the end . Thank you your wonder way with words.

A wonderful story, I guess that says it all. Thank you.

This is without a doubt the best I have read on Literotica

what else can I say

What a great story without the gory sex just a really good yarn

This is such a lovely story of love and devotion. For the first time in many, many years I felt emotion. It began by my being chocked up when Terry was reading the letter from Laura in the lawyers office and built to tears through the balance of the story to where Terry and Wendy were in the back room and talking about Laura's presence. At this time I could barely finish as I was weeping so much, couldn't stop for quite a while. Thank you. I feel human again.

Tastefully written and I enjoyed it very much. I must admit I was a little bit surprised on a porn site to find a regular kind of a story like this. Good Job

This excellent story seems as if it might be based on an actual occurence. A fantastic memoir of devotion and love; with or without the sex.

A very engrossing narrative, very down to earth and mature as the wine described in the story. Keep the good work going.

Your writing is so natural and descriptive. I'm evolving as a writer, and love the easy way images flow through your writing. Very nice development and flawless presentation. Thank you!

A delightful story, well written. I hope to be able to be 1/2 as good.

Not raunchy sex, but gentle and meaningful, not porn but a crafted story,

Although old this story still attracts me to reread it

T

Thanks

Thank you so much for the wonderful story. It brought tears to my eyes as you ended it. I think he made great use of his education. He used it to live his life fully.

The only question is, Did he take advantage of his education? Or would he have been better off spending four years with Laura?

This has to be very best and moving short story I have read, on either this site or in fact any book. This story if filled out would make one of the best tear jerking films, and I for one would pay to see it and buy the DVD too.

Thank you for a beautiful story.

What a story! Beautiful; if there were six stars, as the other reviewer said, I'd give this one six stars!! Thanks for letting the rest of us in on this beautiful story!!

A truly beautiful story and I wish I could give it 6 or 8 or 10 stars. You have a way with words that brought out feelings in me that I haven't felt for years. I, too, cried at the gentle loving way in which you wrote of her death and the incredible passion which she put in her final letter. We are all so lucky to have found this delightful story and I hope that you will write more of them. Truly you have a genius for writing in so many ways. Thank you for enabling me to enjoy a few moments of real joy and happiness.

It made me cry, thinking about the woman that I loved and lost, knowing how much she loved Charlie, how much I love Beth.

wonderful.a piece of soft love story rather than a erotic one.thanks to author.

Wonderful!!! I loved it. It gonna be a good hollywood movie..........

Well, it was touching and made me cry. Great story!

This is a very touching story - I really enjoyed it, but more, I could even visualize the farm he writes about.

I did cry. Well written. I would love to read more stories if you ever write them. Thank you for sharing! <3

It was a great story. Almost feels like you were relating an experience. Well done!!

Very well written, excellent work.

this is the only time I've written a comment about anything I've read, BRAVO

This is not pornographic, nor is it really about sex. This is true erotica. Your foreplay was helping the reader become acquainted with Laura. Her metamorphosis from a female hermit grape farmer who never smiled to a beautiful, tender woman was masterful. It was as if Terry saw the person inside, never putting her down nor making her feel as if he were doing Laura a favor. He accepted her for who she was. I started crying when Laura told him about Charlie. I cried harder when she died. Thank you for such a loving, tender story. Of all the stories that I've read on this site, Laura's Vineyard is absolutely the best.

I almost cried, that is a great story, so much emotion!! Don't stop writing you're a great writer.

What a wonderful thoughtful story. The depth of feeling was,dare I say as good as "the old man and the sea" which I also loved. Thank you and can we have more please

There is a depth of feeling and an ability to express it that is rarely found. Thank you for the enjoyment.

It's one of the best short stories I've ever read, keep up the good work.

I know not, of your wellspring,,,,,,but return to it often...be it talent, be it gift or be it insight,,,,never loose it, for it will lead you through a wonderfully fullfilling life.

This is probably the best story I've read here...maybe anywhere. It is so well written, which is a major plus, but it also has all the elements of real love and respect for a woman, which is something we don't see too often. I will definitely read your other offerings. You are so talented.

Just an amazingly touching story.

That was a great story and you are a very talented writer. I have to say you touched me as well and I couldn't help but wonder why you were wasting your time here, although I guess well all have to find our audience and confirmation of our talents from others somewhere. I'm happy that you got the responses you did and hope that it encourages you to continue your writing. Given the nature of this site, I understand your use of the erotic, but felt it was almost out of place in such an emotional and tender story. Hints of it would have been enough, but it certainly was good in its own rite. Best of luck and I hope you much sucess.

Man U must seriously write stories. U have a wonderful way of telling stories U know. Absolutely loved reading it. Never expected this kinda story here anyway :D.