All Comments on 'Laura's Vineyard'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 days ago

Damn you---I cried!

BulldogfortyfourBulldogfortyfour13 days ago

Wow! An outstanding teary eyed story.

I came back to look for stories I missed . Glad I found this gem.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

A heartwarming special story thankyou

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Thank you for sharing such a tender story. Usually stories I read in this venue never effect me this way , but with that said I was balling in the last parts and what Laura had to tell him to bring closure to their relationship and and the caring she had had for this special young man was unique I’m sure.

I wish you congratulations on making an old man tear up with such an awesome story and so well written..

I being of that same age group as terry it all feels so real!!!

Please grace us with more as I will place you on my favorites list I’m sure.

Diecast1Diecast1about 2 months ago

Absolutely love this story. Still trying to get the dust out of my eyes. AAAAAAAAAA+++++++++++

Richard1940Richard19402 months ago

Another outstanding tour-de-force. Thank you.

PhredDaggPhredDagg2 months ago

DAMM the wind must have blown some dust into my eyes...😥. Not bad.. I'll have to read it again to make sure it deserves the 10 stars I think it should get.

Peapod41Peapod412 months ago

The writer exposed as a manipulator of the readers' emotions. Some may say the story is sappy.

others may use the word saccharine. I call it truth. And beauty. This is in the tradition of Faulkner.

I'd opine seven stars.

Pussylover0286Pussylover02862 months ago

Had me in tears what more could you say, Brilliant

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Tears are streaming down my 91 year old face. So realistic. Now I have to dry the tears and read the rest of your works. Thank you.

Thumper94Thumper943 months ago

A truly heart warming story. I loved it

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Wonderful story, 10 stars aren't even close. Laura was what he needed, as well as he was what she needed... I know it's fiction, but not necessarily fiction, because it can happen in real life...

oldgraycatoldgraycat4 months ago

OMG What a wonderful and totally different type of story. This grips my heart in such a warm way.

Thank you Ronde for this great work.

GarrieDGarrieD4 months ago

Thanks for the great story and the tears in my eyes.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Its a true one story, very personal

goodshoes2goodshoes24 months ago

WOW. Eyes are moist. A smile on my lips. Felt as if i was living in the story. Thank you.

nodinegnodineg5 months ago

I've just run across this story today, several years after you wrote it. It's a lovely story of love and commitment. I have read many of your later stories but this is, so far, your best. I loved it. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Real people with real love will always touch the sole. Thanks for showing what it manifests.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This is the third time I have read this wonderful story. Thank you for a true love story!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

On a scale of one to ten, you deserve a Twelve for this tale.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Damned hayfever, in November too.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy6 months ago

I wasn't able to find a score or comment but I know I read it. I had added it to my favorites. This might be your best story but you've written so many wonderful ones! Thanks.

5

wwaldripwwaldrip6 months ago

A very romantic loving caring story, as I read it tears came to my eyes. Keep writing!

Cracker270Cracker2706 months ago

This is one damn fine story. Thank you

LeFrog08LeFrog087 months ago

Very nice. Another one I liked.

I’ve just discovered this author

and I’m currently Ronde binging.

Just_John1Just_John17 months ago

Reading through this one again. Read it so many times I’ve lost count. Just awesome. Thank you so much for sharing your work and characters with us. An excellent read!

Jj1

BabalooieBabalooie8 months ago

Beautiful story.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Simply excellent

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved it. Even if it did bring tears to my old man's eyes.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Beautiful storytelling.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very touching

Anghellic_RageAnghellic_Rage8 months ago

I stumbled across this story some years ago but after some searching I discovered it still has the same magic that it did when I first found it. Bravo to you on an exquisite tale of enduring love and un conditional understanding.

OvercriticalOvercritical9 months ago

This story describes a touch of personal magic that happens between two people who don't let convention and others dictate their behavior towards each other. It tells us to treat others with an open mind rather than prejudge them. It left me with a very warm feeling. 5*, of course.

SequoiaSempervirensSequoiaSempervirens9 months ago

A wonderful story! Wish I could give this more than five stars. Thanks for sharing.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman9 months ago

Just an excellent story. Thanks, my 2nd reading.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I remember reading this story years ago and I am just as enchanted by it now as I was then.

Darkie10Darkie1010 months ago

This is a sweet story.

abboncabbonc11 months ago

As far as I can recall, this is the first story I ever read on this site, back in 2002 or thereabouts. I haven't read it again until now, and it is still a beautiful tale.

I am glad to see that you are back, but, as a long-time reader on this site, may I be so bold as to offer a small piece of advice?

Slow down! You are submiting stories at express speed, but the proofreading is suffering, as shown by the increasing number of typos.

Looking forward to reading even more of your work, including some of your previous submissions in other categories, that I have not read (because I don't usually read in those categories!)

Best wishes,

Nick

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Absolutely beautiful!

RangeExpanderRangeExpander11 months ago

This is really lovely and grabs my heart as well as my balls, in the best way. I love the characters, and the depth. I was a bit put out by the suddenness of Laura's transformation from grumpy and frumpy to gorgeous, but that was the only moment that seemed to miss a best. Everything else felt real and natural and lovely, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Beautiful and touching! I am really enjoying your stories.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Do not ever stop writing!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This is hands down one of the best, if not THE BEST stories I have read on Literotica or ANY OTHER erotica story website! Definitely the BEST ROMANCE STORY HERE! And I usually don't enjoy the Romance category! Thank you Ronde !

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I am a 73 year old male.

I wept.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Simply Wonderfull

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A beautiful story.

Thank you.

Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wonderfull story. Thanks!

JoeMo1619JoeMo1619about 1 year ago

Unbelievable good story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I’d give you a 10 on this one if I could! Probably the best story I’ve read on this site. Well done!

OlaaOlaaabout 1 year ago

I don't often write reviews but this one moved me Well Done you made a Fan

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great, I thought it well re-searched peroid story. No mandatory oral, anal, glazing, choking or rough. I think with being younger the phrasing of her reaching down to stimulate the clitoris was out of place, with her natural grooming how could he see the nub? Her doing the action fits, just that wording seem more 2023 stroke story. Parts of the ending seemed long, liked Wendy's playfulness. I really did enjoyed the story.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 1 year ago

reread for me and this is still great

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One of the best stories I’ve read on this site … wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Laura's Vineyard is one of my favorite stories. I come back to it every once in a while and am always touched by reading it.

Thank you for such a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellently done.... Great story!

UncertainTUncertainTover 1 year ago

I don't really like crying to a story but I am willing to make exceptions.

roadking42447roadking42447over 1 year ago

very well written !

oakapple1234oakapple1234almost 2 years ago

What a touching, heartfelt story—full of emotion, regret, and love. One of the most deeply satisfying I’ve read on Literotica.

The only little point to raise—The University of Michigan doesn’t have a program in agriculture. That’s at Michigan State. Both have engineering programs, though (says a grad of both schools).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

OUTSTANDING STORY! THANK YOU!

PurplefizzPurplefizzalmost 2 years ago

Oh my word, that was a wonderful tale, somehow you completely captured their sense of loss and desolation but mixed with hope, wistfulness and love, I’m in tears after reading that and tbh I’m not sure why. Damn fine story though. 5⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Bloody great and so real.

2old4us2old4usabout 2 years ago

What a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Absolutely beautiful!

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53about 2 years ago

Absolutely beautiful. Words cannot express enough how wonderful it is.

bob4300sbob4300sover 2 years ago

I’ve read this story a dozen times over the years. Still my favorite. Incredibly well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Probably the best one I have read in this format. Beautiful flowing sentences, no grammatical errors and no obscene sexual phrasing either. You are a gifted writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm a 72 yr old Vietnam Veteran and your story made me shed a few tears. Wonderful read and I won't soon forget " Laura's Vineyard " Don D.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Such a well wrought story. It brought tears to the eyes of this old geezer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Every time I come back and reread this, I rate it 5 stars and cry before and after rating it. Love like this is rare, in stories and life. Thanks for making us believe it nad live with it, even for a short while.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I just want to fap not cry.

5/5 on this story though, such bittersweet ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WoW!

Crissy4uCrissy4uover 2 years ago

Crying 😭

Beautiful story

DapitbullDapitbullover 2 years ago

True love im still crying

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Truly wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I've read this story about 5 times now so it must mean something to me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Beautiful love story

STILL CRYING

cpl757cpl757almost 3 years ago

Very nice. Thank you.

Shmcurdcc06Shmcurdcc06about 3 years ago

Anything I could add would only diminish what I have just read.

paulzballzpaulzballzabout 3 years ago

this is one of the best. thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I have read this story many times and I always end with a damp eye ! Beautifully written and a true love story that can really be enjoyed . Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Brilliant story

Brilliant story, Absolutely loved it. A poignant tale of love and happiness together with a degree of sadness. Thank you so much for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Well done

I have read this story twice, and enjoyed.it.even more the second time!

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanusover 3 years ago
Beautiful Story

Thanks for Sharing!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A beautiful story

You write very well. Ignore the comments that disparage the dream; that BOY isn't old enough to understand. Loved it. Glenn

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not very good

Barley made it to page 2. Looked for the sex part, disappointing, very.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
thank you

Over several years I hav eread this story multiple times and it brings tears to my eyes every time. thank you for a great story!

almac5588almac5588over 3 years ago

You are a master story telley

DazzyDDazzyDalmost 4 years ago
Excellent

Basic values, hard work and honest emotions!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Outstanding Story & Writing.

This stands out among the others. Defo one of the best that I have read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
beautifully real ...

This wonderful story is my benchmark, not just in erotica [which would have debased

it] but in very fine, general literature

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent Story

A great story beautifully written and believable, this was so believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Deserves 6 stars!

Absolutely the best short story I have read in a long time. Kudos and thanks to the author.

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
What A Great Story*****

Just a great piece of writing. Thanks for sharing.

Wolfgang1955Wolfgang1955over 4 years ago
Wow

It was a great story.

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