All Comments on 'Laura's Vineyard'

Thank you so much for this wonderful story. Brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful, poignant, touching. Beautiful.

I'm new to Literotica and not generally prone to leaving coments. I've written a story (Pillow Talk (Loving Wives)) that I thought was good until now. This is what great erotica is about!

Had me in tears at the end, it was so beautifully written, and such a satisfying story. The erotic element was well done, but only part of a much greater whole.

You have a great talent for expressing the bittersweet state of being an ageing woman.

A truley great story wrote with feeling & sincerity to the story line.A really good read & may it add power to your elbow.

Thanks & Carry on Your good work

This is one of those stories that affect you so much that you have to read it more than once.An extremely moving story from a master storyteller.

hard absolute realty, touched with tenderness, lilt with the flavour of humane emotion, the turbulance of passion,

the sacrifice of conformity

truly the traits and pleasure of a fine mature wine

Nice job Ronde. Very touching. An erotic story that actually makes me think about life.

You have a great gift of telling a story that not many people in this whole world has. I would say that you're equal to the authors that write best selling romance novels. This is a wonderful short story, and would make a good submission to a publisher to showcase your talent. I agree with the others that you should write a book.

I totally agree with the man (woman?) suggesting you to write a book. Well go ahead. I will be the one who will buy it first....

I love to read erotic literature, but your story touched me in a different way.

You should write a book.....no, really you should!

A story, well done and beutifly told.

PK

Ronde, I missed this one before and I found it to be one of the most touching stories I've read here. Some one said before that you should complile your stories in a book. Please consider it, I'd buy a copy. And, please, continue to write. And, for some reason, I really want a glass of Michigan made wine right now.

Just great. It is more than just a story. You lived it.

Even if the story is fiction from an active imagination, it is a wonderful tribute to the memory of "Laura and Charlie."

Laura's dedication to the work in spite of great sacrifice and hardship is very touching.

Thanks for your diligence in writing this story for all of us to share.

I have to agree to Anonymous in Kentucky on this one though I have a tendency to cry easily, but i must admit that that this was the most touching story i ever read. Also I belive that I will remember story for a long time, since storys that tend to move me deeply like this stays with me for a long time..

This has to be the most touching story I've ever read. The wonderful characters Ronde has created, the atmosphere around them, everything blends together to create a literary masterpiece. True this story touched me ever so deeply. I don't cry easily, but this story moved me to tears.

I hope that someday Ronde decides to expand thiss story into a full novel. I think it has the potential to be a best seller.

Your lovely story is full of beauty, passion, loneliness, respect, lust, caring, nostalgia. It is one of the best I've read on this site. Thank you so much. Hoping to read more from you.