All Comments on 'Lauren, Mega Babe'

by Brian1

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honeysluthoneyslutover 13 years ago
Great Story!!!

Super HOT! Please keep it up! Oh, and add another chapter ot four.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved it

Brian1,

Thanks for another great story. Will it continue?

Cheers.

fix8ionfix8ionalmost 12 years ago
dream come true

Great story. Dream come true with the exception of I wouldn't want to be standing in a hallway in nothing but panties.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
It's easy

Just say No. Not just no, HELL NO! As in get away from me you crazy bitch before I put you in the hospital. Who needs the abuse, humiliation or grief.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
SO not interesting

The story that is. Not even mildly entertaining. Simplistic dialogue. Characters that act for reasons beyond understanding, creating no interest in what they do or say.

Bad. Even for fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I wonder?

How did the women get their putters out of their asses when the men shoved them up there and left them?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Of course he dumped her.

But not before recording several times on his I-phone. On the gold course the next day, none of the guys showed up. She was toast when the video became public.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
good story

Ever think about making a part 2?

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