All Comments on 'Lauren's Visit'

So good I didn't make it to the end of the first page. I will definitely favorite it and finish it later ... in two or three more installments, I hope. Very well written, concise and to the point. Quick, but not instant gratification, which is what we're all here for. Makes me want to read on. Well done!

Excellent story, really enjoyed reading and jacking off to it.

SMOKIN HOT

Steve

Just such a hot and engaging story. Absolutely loved it.

has to be one of the hottest stories I've read...and I keep rereading it,..still a smoker...