by MSTarot
I don't even become hard as I read many of your stories. My turn on is beyond that for me, regardless of the genders. My mind's turn-on is what I seek most, thank you.
I think I share Travis's skills/confidence but my subjects seem so difficult to find.
I wish you the best in doing more than just your skilled writing, tho I do suspect you may have similar places to turn-on. ;)
I just read this for the second time. Loved it just the same. Hoping that there will be more of these two soon.
The switches between present and past tense towards the end were very distracting, though.
Had a feeling that was going to happen, ha. Enjoyable read on the whole, interesting to see the 'coming out' experience from a 1st person perspective.
I have experienced many emotions while reading stories here, but never before have I wept at a stories beauty. Thank you so much for sharing it.
The reference to Kiss and Gene Simmonds did remind me that he has a very long tongue - now transferred to Jazz that would have been a treat! Loved this. Nice to include a black on white theme too. I could thanks to your characterisation picture these people as one couple. Beautiful.
Finally a story that fully embraces the nude day contest themet. Very beautifully written by a skilled author. Thanks for writing.
I thought the story was well written. I would love to see more of these two.