All Comments on 'Lawyer Debbie Does Dessert Ch. 02'
by shaunreagh
- 13 Comments
jimewestalmost 16 years agoYou write the reluctant-but-libidinous female part as well as I've ever seen it done.
Thank you.
exjockalmost 16 years agothis was not a believable tale. No woman would proceed to do these things without a more thorough disscussion with her husband. Much less an attorney, supposedly schooled and skilled in negotiations. What could be so important as to let this crass man have her to try to cement a deal that was already cemented, Sorry, just not believable.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoYour stories might be "unbelievable" but 90 percent of the stories on this site are. It is all fantasy anyway. Your writing style is different but erotic. The slow build-up of tension in your stories, told from her point of view, until the woman's body responds beyond her physical but not mental control is exciting. I would love to read a sequel to "Pissed off with Jeff." That is my favorite.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoGreat work as always shaun. I'm happy to see some new material from you!
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoYour reluctant wife stories are amazing.And you always come up with great new scenarios. The build up is always incredible and your stream of thought writing is great. I've bookmarked your author's page and I'm constantly on a look out for new contributions from you. Keep on writing!
SweetLittleLiaralmost 16 years agoMmmmm Shaun, it's delicious; a very well deserved "E!" I really do think this is a step or two above your previous excellent efforts; the narrator's voice describes the experience in vivid and graceful prose that never becomes overwrought. But will there be a Chapter 3? You've left me wanting more!
Anonymousabout 14 years agoYour stories are written in a tone and style that no one else can seem to incorporate into their writings quite as well. I will read this story many more times in the near future!
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoHow about:
Debbie Does:
Dinner, Danish, Denver, Dover, Dublin, Dubai, Diego Garcia, Doha, Damascus, Darwin Station, Derry, Devon, Des Moines, Duluth, Denmark, Disneyland, Desert Storm; just to name a few titles!
Anonymousabout 1 month agoI have never read the act of sex described as you have so eloquently did. It was so hot. A third chapter is warranted, please. 5/5.
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