by fittucker87
Please find an editor. Just to fix the few mistakes with names. Otherwise, solid story and hopefully with future chapters.
Great story. You should do additional chapters with these same characters pirn it no porn.
Who is Natasha??? (What is her full name???)
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You definitely can write and it is exciting. A great set up. Enough description without excess and a realistic and fun script. Loved it.
You've got a good thing going here: I like the balance between nice and nasty. I hope you continue with this. Many thanks.
I love your lawyer to the pornstars series man, it's really well written and I'd love to read more. Keep writing dude.