All Comments on 'Le Libertin'

Great story line, very realistic as pieces and parts go. Marriages and relationships get jacked up that way but life & shit happens. Decisions have to be made after events happen like it did in this story, life altering but we all only usually get one shot at a happy life.

BRAVO! Keep writing these quality offerings!

Thanks whomever you are. I really do appreciate your feedback. While based on real characters, the story is merely fantasy. I will, however be receptive to any constructive criticism as I don't feel the story to be polished enough yet. Currently working on a new, multi part story. The first part called "Obsession" was started tonight (so a ways to go). Thanks All who've read.

WOW.....I am envious of this man. What intensity you have created. Great wordsmithing. Thanks.

I'd like to thank those who've provided feedback and those who've favoured the story. It really does give a buzz to be appreciated. I'd also like to thank those who've voted. It doesn't cost anything and inspires so much. So if you like this story, if it made you hot, made you fap!, made you mad or if I just failed to suspend your disbelief, I'd love to know what you thought, vote for it, write a comment (go on baby, criticise me, I like it hard. or stroke me good.), make it a fave, but most of all. Enjoy, I can't improve (and, as a perfectionist with word as well as tongue), when I don't know what I'm doing wrong. ;)

Brilliant story, been there, got that T shirt, knowing that it will end in pain but unable to stop it, like a slow motion train crash occurring in front of your eyes.