All Comments on 'Leah's Bondage Ch. 11-12'

It's the perfect ending!!!

Excellent Ending. Hope you will continue to write more stuff. I was thrilled when I saw this on the new list!

WELCOME BACK!!!

Love it!

Loved this ending so much more than the others! Please keep it up!

Amazing ending!

Coincidentally, I just reread Leah's story last week, and thought again how I just wasn't satisfied with either original alternate ending. This new ending was perfectly in tune with the rest of the story! Carlton learned to acknowledge his feelings without becoming a weak weenie, and Leah accepted her feelings for Carlton. BRAVA!

Amazing!!! totally brought tears to my eyes, i loved your work before and was indifferent to either previous endings but found this to work perfectly with the whole story, you are a truly amazing artist and i so look forward to reading more of your work, you are truly a inspiration and i thank you for giving a lonely slave missing her Master something to read and dream about...with warm regards a fan in Texas naynay

A perfect ending to a compelling and interesting story. I hope that in time there are more tales of their future together.

loved this ending also Carlton and Leah together happy

I much preferred the ending where Leah basically told Carlton to get lost. She was right in that ending. No one who treats a woman like he did, having her kidnapped and declared dead, deserves any happiness.

this ending is so much better than the others!!!!!! glad to see that Carlton and rabbit are happy with each other...

Thank you for your story about Leah and her master. It brought back bittersweet memories about my own struggle and left me pondering the complexity of the lifestyle.

Why do the powerful and commanding struggle with possession so? LOL. Speaking from personal experience, it is when they realize you are giving to them completely that they begin to fret about the tethers of possession turning on them. And so, they try to push you away and deny their feelings. Accepting their will as your own, even when they are really only lying to themselves, is just another form of suplication. In my case, it was heartbreaking, but I kept my faith and love alive and was rewarded when he came back to me. We are now happily married. I serve him, but we belong to each other.

I love all of your stories, so much passion and even at times violence but lots of passion. I love this ending i liked all but this one won my heart the most. Great Job!

Thank you so much for rewriting a new ending! This is one of my favorite stories, but the ending never felt right. This ending is perfect!

WOW! this was GREAT!, I put my Anne Rice aside to finish the series, and now i dont wanna go back, lol. This ending has my vote, and the story is the best ive read here or anywhere else. WORK IT GIRL!Now im off to read some more of your stuff! thanks so much.

Millisande

I have dreamt of being held in such a Master's arms as Carlton's and did have that at one time. This story brought tears and memories flooding back to me. How I long for those feelings once again.

Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

Bravo!

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Definitely the best ending!

You are definately sent from god, to give all your readers pleasure, i have now read every single word, every single story you have posted, and ahve been entranced with them all, please continue to use your gift. I wouldnt be suprised if one day your stories became books, from the adventures of kate i was entranced and then i was amazed at the story of dragon master, and couldnt help myself. I dream of kates adventures to be mine, i dream of Rabbits adventures to be mine, a master like carlton Alas in the present time this is to not be my fate, But you give me hope of finding a master through your writings, please continue, as your stories bring hours upon hours of mindless ednless orgasms and pleasure, thank you

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I loved the third ending. Thank you for writing it.

That was my favourite ending!

Ok.. this is crazy... I used to roll play/cyber on a website about 2 years ago, but it got shut down.

Anyways, I used to do a roll play all the time just like this. So like this its scary.

I set the roll play up in my head then shared it with others and told them how I kinda like it to go...

A lot of times it would turn out just right but sometimes people killed it...

Haha anyways I used to start it off with me being a girl who was kiddnapped and being held at a wearhouse. Men would come in look around and purchase slaves... I got into more detail when setting it up...

Anyways I would tell the guy that I was doing it with that I want to do it so it starts out kinda rough, but they end up falling for each other. And in it, it used to work out just like this all the time. Even a couple of times guys threw in me (the slave) getting rapped or hurt by another man and them saving me. Just like your storys.

I loved this... It was so odd to have someone write this out. It was like you went in my head, took my thoughts and typed them up.

AMAZING. LOVEDDD IT!

I am unsure why I like your stories a combination of perfect writing and dialog I suspect, but I find myself re-reading them often. You seem to be able to put everything needed into these stories for them to be exceptional. I particularly like how hatred of the unfirmilar and hatred towards the master turns into longing and LOVE for the same person whom they once dispised. PERFECT.... cer

This ending is more in tune with the story and the theme.... the other ending just didn't seem to work. Excellent writing even though I had several anxious moments when Leah was with those other owners.

...slykitte

Best ending of the three choices - though my rational mind says that the girl should be free. There were a few unexpected typos that slowed me down momentarily that could have been caught. Overall - very, very, good. Thanks.

Agree. This ending is better than the other two. It's more in keeping with the spirit of the willingness of a personality to submit after a prolonged behavior pattern. Excellent story!

I really love this ending the most, it brought tears to my eyes and fit much more with the story than the other two.

thank you, so much for sharing this.

This is the best outcome any slave can want and hope for. I truly found myself following Leah on her journey and this is the ending I would choose. Thank you for writing such a great series.

Best ending of the three, loved the story

This is the best out of the three endings. I love the characters and this one fit them more than the others. Great job.

Loved this entire series, and this ending is definitely the best one BUT right at the very end it lost its impact for me when Rabbit has to always ask her master if she can still be his slave.......because doesn't that leave it open for him to one day say NO? so that little bit at the end just disappointed me a little.....or maybe I havnt understood that bit correctly, but all in all a fantastic read thank you.

I loved this ending!

I found myself being so disappointed with the other two! Even though she was free to live her own life, which in reality she should be, she still wasn't able to be with the man she loved. Nor he to her.

But that just made this ending so much more pleasing to read! When she was finally back with him and they could both be happy, I actually gave a sigh of relief! And also felt a broad grin spread across my face.

Now I just wish I had my own Carlton Darlby to call Master!

Seeing that my name is Leah.. hehe

Thankyou for a great story!

L.

The other 2 endings were totally jarring. Probably because Carlton had lost his absolute belief in himself in the other 2 endings. It made his character very weak and not at all what he had been in the beginning of the story. I love this ending, it seems right for both characters. I love this story, was absolutely mesmerized by it. I'm going to look for more of your submissions now.

When I first read the other two endings I was severely disappointed. Unsatisfying, empty, and completely out of the blue - it was no longer a cohesive story. This ending is much, much better and although I would have liked a sex scene to finish it off, it was still spectacular. Carlton and Rabbit make such a delightful D/s couple.

I loved this story from ch.1-12 good ending very nice

I felt the other two version were no ness the story is good as is, please i would like to read more from you!

you have no idea how intensely this story moved me. I have never been so emotionally moved and touched by a story like this. My heart genuinely ached for these characters, feeling their despair and love. It was an absolute delight to read, a beautiful story. Please write more!!

The ending is perfect, Carlton is a good man deep down, you just had to take away what he loved most to realise that

this ending was by far the worst

Usually I can't stand these stories but this has to be one of my favourite stories on the whole site! This is my favourite ending too. Perfection.

I absolutly loved reading this series! I find myself coming back every so often to see if you wrote anything that has to do with this series. I really would love to see what happens now that she is back with him after those long months without him. Will she behave herself or put herself at risk for more punishment? It's all so interesting and would love to see your writing more frequently. Thanks for a great story!

Now this is a wonderful ending to this.....I just lvoe this whole series!!!!!!!!!!! And this ending is just "right"....anyone who has submissive feelings would know that this ending is "suited" for this story....I LOVE IT! :) :)

I read the whole thing in one go, and I have to say I like this ending best of all. Thanks for giving me all these ideas and fantasies.

Where are you Passion?

not going to lie, i had a hard time sticking with the story because normally i do not like the non-consent stories... but yours was just too good to stop reading. that's why i just absolutely LOVED this ending. it was so, so perfect for the story. the others were good, but this one was just amazing. thank you for writing one of the best stories on here.

Thank you for this story, from beginning to end.

Wow...I willingly ignored my schoolwork for this, and it was so worth it. Great job. This ending was my favorite of the choices.

Here's hoping I dream about having such a wonderful Master tonight...

the story was completely fullfilling please write more because thi book has me looking of you wrote new ones EVERYDAY!

There's so much passion and feeling put into this story..as a submissive I could almost feel what Leah was feeling...you're a great writer, hope you have more stories to submit :)

i have read all three endings and this in my opinion is the best, though i do like the ending where Leah is strong enough to say goodbye to Carlton.

Thank you PassionStJohn for a really wonderful story. i do hope you will write more stories on this site soon.

This was a great story, I wish you would continue it. Also, out of the three endings this one is by far the best.

I was really impressed by the quality and emotional content of this series. To be honest, I think I liked the first ending the best - this one I thought Leah had lost her strength, but in general I loved this series a lot. You really kept me reading for story.

I'm not really much for the BDSM stories, but I have to say yours really was good. I like how you offered different endings for the story and your characters. You have really good imagination.

I prefer the first ending. The whole series is very well written. Kudos.

I liked all the endings. Each one seemed emotionally true to the characters.

Love the first and second endings. Not the last. I actually liked her walking out on him! He was awful to her and didn't deserve her at the end. She went through hell because of his insecurities and selfishness...I almost wanted him to get killed or her end up with Raymond! I loved him!!

Thank you for a compelling story. All of the endings were well written, but the last one is my favorite. I think it is the most true to type of story--although the other 2 endings were certainly more realistic since non-consensual slavery is not such a good thing. I like the story though, and enjoyed this last ending. Thanks for taking time to share your stories.

c/p my comment left at the end of the chapter 11: choice 1. I have read the entire story, including both endings and I find this one the best one. I think that you can work with it and show how they change and grow and how their relationship progresses. After all, she is now for all intents and purposes, a free woman. just like it should be.

after reading the whole story and all of the endings this is the one I like the best. Carlton has taken Raymonds example and followed it well. now Leah and Carlton get everything they need/want.

This was the ending I wanted - thank you

This feels more realistic than either of the other endings

I like this ending. Maybe the two of the will find love together. Who Knows?

Thank you for the story

Sherrylee1015

What fun to be given options for the ending! And to top off that fun, the last ending I read was my favorite :-) all through the other endings I thought, "oh no, how sad... I wish they could end up together like they want to be..." and here it is! Thank you for making this so much fun!

I must say.... as a submissive woman the story that unfolded between Carlton and Rabbit, was a passionate one. One that leaves me breathless, physically breathing shallow, reliving the images, the thought of his power, her power. This man has before him now, his most willing slave, she gave herself to him, her greatest, ultimate possession, her life, her soul, she gave to him. Her power to endure......to please is without end. His power is limitless :) Angel......

This was the best ending ever! I was so angry with Carlton I was practically screaming at the computer screen. I'm so glad to see this ending, much better!

I loved the story of Leah and her Master. I want my SIR to be as proud of me as Carton was of his rabbit!

The quality and thought which went into this series was outstanding. Almost made me want to change places with rabbit, but Raymond was probably the better master.

More please x

The third ending, 'Leah's Bondage Ch. 11-12' is by far the best.

Thanks for a great read!!

No question.

It's certenly the most realistic ending!!!!

First thank you PassionStJohn for writing an ending. So many writers on this site leave good stories unfinished. I love that you not only wrote an ending but that you wrote three. Being new to reading BDSM stories I have had mixed feelings, especially when they are not finished. From the first story in this series I was hooked both by the characters and by your form of writing.

As to the three endings the first ending when Leah shows her strength, spirit and courage would seem to be most in keeping with the brave and defiant Leah during her time with Carlton. It is refreshing to see a strong woman not cave in and return to the slave lifestyle. Carlton has to prove he deserves another chance.

The third ending is the one a true romantic would want. A happily ever after and yet I feel that Carlton will never really learn (after all it is his families legacy) and that Leah is throwing away her spirited self.

Ultimately you gave your readers three excellent endings and did not leave us hanging. The story and choice of endings would make a great book club selection and I am sure a very lively discussion on which ending is best.

Thanks again for the excellent writing. So glad to have stumbled upon your work!

Well I loved the whole series, at least the dynamic between Carlton and Leah

Not so much all the yukky. Physical pain..

But read all 3 endings.thus was coming home.and felt the best ending ever!!

I saved writing a review on this series until I was done. Overall, I give it 3/5 stars. The story had its high and low points. This story had great potential but lost traction along the way. The point, I think, where the author really loses his readers was in the way Carlton handled the aftermath of Burger’s assault on Leah. After that point, the entire plot was a train wreck waiting to happen.

I really loved this story and the ending. I wished there had not been quite so much torture, but then it wouldn't have had the same ending. Thank you for sharing this love story.

Overall so well written. Thank you. The sudden personality change in Carlton after the hospital admission was bizarre-he went from calm 45year aristocrat to an emotional wreck overnight. He cruelly sold her off in a drunken stupor and so I personally didn't think he deserved her for the finale. But at least Leah got the end she wanted.

Amazing story and thank you so much for each of the different endings!