All Comments on 'Learning About Myself Pt. 01'

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gentleoneexplorergentleoneexplorerover 8 years ago
Quite Intriguing

This story is a very well thought out story and is not the usual forced submission or drastic punishment. She is submitting but she is doing it first out of shock and then out of pleasure. No doubt there are times she questions her husband and his requirements as she did in the car however she did discover she was submissive and that was new and that she could give him control. The end where he said he was going to have someone else watch him punish her is pushing her limits and it remains to be seen how she can handle this as all of her discovery and submission has been between just the two of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
hot but he's a bit cold

Liked the story (except at the end - another person is something no dominant should push on a submissive rather it must be something they are both excited about and have a lengthy conversation about what is and isn't ok for both of them and honestly it's not really my thing), very well written, interesting build. I thought the husband was a bit too cold though. Would love to see some affection and normalcy in their relationship too. Looking forward to next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Delighted

That you are back writing here. You work is so very good and it has been too long between stories.8E5D

Lord_GroLord_Groabout 8 years ago
I only just learned that you are back.

Your work is just as good as it was previously, if not improved. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Must continue!!

I find your writings excellent and was upset you didn't decide to complete the story. Or if you have it is not ready for publishing. I write similar D/s stories and know the difficulty of writer's block. I can never attain your level of excellence. Please complete the story. She MUST be punished in front of a stranger or friend to amp up her humiliation. Thank You

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