by columfa
It was a long wait between stories, but well worth it. I just wish there was just one more. You finally hinted at what a lot of were waiting for, and that was for Charlene to be involved. Just one more, please and bring her into the scene. Of course, she will have to learn all the players are related, but that makes it more hot. Thanks for a great series.
A tremendous series,the door closes on this,but I have a strange feeling that this "cast" could well star again???
It was a wonderful series and thank you for all the lovely orgasms. Reading you was like being there.
I have shared your series with my Husband and Son, which lead to many stimulating conversations.
Thank you so much for your literary expertise and I look forward to any future works you may have in mind.
Very well done.
How about a series with all 6 involved - 3 men and 3 women.
You have give yourself a self imposed finish point - but we all want more - so please continue - a couple more episodes please
man this series was by for the best one i have read in awhile.i was so wondering when u was going to put charlene back in the story, i would def. love to see what happens on that anniversary nite. i bet poor charlene cums so much she can't keep contious. loved it loved it and loved and i am definatly wanting more "I AM NOT STRONG" i ain't gonna lie
I'm not sure the ending was as strong as some of the other chapters but I did enjoy the epilogue. There were some grammatical errors that detracted but I don't want to be 'that guy' saying that it ruined it for me. One problem that I did have was if she was truly ruined for other men then why was she still involved with the boyfriend? Keep writing (this is not a vote for ch 13).
One of the hottest stories on Literotica. I hope we see more from this author.
dam, this set IS the best one i've read, the descritpive motions (mainly orgasms) and thoughts helped ssssoooooooo much!!!! too erotic for me to score!
Wow absolutely awesome, you have great insight of a woman's feelings!
Thanks!
The mother was a hot slutty milf, the son was a horny bastard who knew his mum needed fucking in every hole, and Kitty was a teen slut who needed her dad's cock. It was superbly written. Thank you columfa.
Thank you that was an awesome story. Glad I was able to read from start to finish without having to wait for a chapter to be wrote.
You now need to write about the poor baby's that came from this coupling. Neither practiced safe sex at all.
Moral of story:
If your going to get your Dick wet wear a raincoat.
I started reading because it was seemed really hot, but after first few chapters I just started reading for the story.
Perfect story! Hot and sweet too. Great characters! Thank you for sharing!
this was a great story. there's so many more directions it could have taken. hopefully one day you'll continue it or write a sequel...
We miss your talented writing and notice that you have not written anything since 2008. Hope all is well with you!
just loved your story it was so hot and sexy and a big teates you have a good fell for incest story so pls give use more some yours leann mawh xxxxxx
Part of me hopes one day more chapters will be added.
Great story. I couldn't stop reading. Just wish Gus had been more involved with a bit more extremity. Cause face it, is sucking cock to get pussy submission or compromise?
Very hot stuff I want more of this family. Mom is such of a slut I love her character.
Though some of your "twists" are a little strange.
You had several errors but one error in particular kills a story for me. When someone is in the bedroom, or other rooms inside the house, and one or the other disrobes, or removes a piece of clothing from their partner and drops it on the GROUND. You made this error multiple times.
If something is dropped inside of a house, it can only be dropped on the FLOOR.
Loved almost all the story. The Father and son blowjob was totally unnecessary, but apart from that, a great multichapter story.
I certainly hope you do another one.