by tzael2003
Totally disappointing that this has ended up like this.
This chain is spiraling out of control, in a negative way...
This story is a little sick. I'm surprised it passed the entrance at literotica.
I DON'T NORMAL GET DOWN ON A WRITER AS IT TAKES TIME, AS WELL AS A DESIRE . YOUR STORY IS NOT ENTERTAINING, AND LACKS A REAL PLOT THAT ANYONE WANTS TO KNOW ABOUT, BUT YOU. SO PLEASE DO NOT WRITE ANYMORE CHAPTERS. ALL THE FEEDBACK IS TELLING YOUR STORY IS PITIFAL. TAKE THE HINT.
I think i quite like it...im into quite alto of stuff and so i didn't think the story warrented some of the comments it got...it was alright...plus this is literotica some people need to stop being so bloody jujmental and let people indulge in what ever thier into
continue the telling of the handjob and also show the mother dominating the other women
Normally I say very little about a person's grammer. You need to check your spelling, it was awful. The bad spelling made the story tough to read. Don't stop writing, keep at it.