by sirhugs
Great story but he should have eaten her asshole out first to loosen her up. Sucking and licking her tailhole and enjoying her scent and taste. Tongue fucking her sphincter before burying his hard cock in her rectum. Once he finished off balls deep in her butthole he should licked and sucked her bunghole clean.
You do it your way buddy and Sirhugs will do it his.
Alternatively - write a fucking story yourself instead of trying to rewrite another authors work!!