All Comments on 'Leaving the Navy Ch. 10'

I really hope its sooner than a year before you add to this story. I have really enjoyed it very much and it keeps getting better and it seems to just be in the middle. Reaturn to it soon.

This story cannot be allowed to end , I don`t think there should be any more "wives/mommas" but the story should really carry on, I cannot get enough of the characters.

Loved the story I had read the previous ones from Scorpio and I must admit It seems as if both of you are thinking the same things with your storyline.

Please don't wait a year before the next segment It would be just too much torture for those of Us waiting to find out what will happen next!

Please consider doing a follow up sooner than a year, I realise that you do post a lot of stories but this is to good to end yet

So thoughtfully written, don't stop now...

Thoughtful and caring piece of work.

.....for a great story, please don't stop here this is to great a story to stop. Keep on writing more other stories if you are not going to continue this one

Thank You again for a well done story Scorpio44a i really enjoyed reading this chapter I will be waiting on the next if you decide to add on another chapter.

Pat

I have read all of your stories - some more than once and this is one of your best. your portrayals of peoples inmost thought processes and emotions are very beautiful and very well communicated. Please continue this story sooner rather than later - your characters have taken on a life of their own.

Loved the story. (Then again, what else is new about your stories, Scorpio44a.)

Thanks.

Absolute perfection is all that I can think of to describe this story. It was soooo worth the wait. Keep up the wonderful work. Live well!!

The Princess

I can only agree that this is a wonderful story, good characters, amazing love. Keep up the great work.

and I wish I could have given it more.

as being a ex-sailor myself, of 32 years, I can truly relate to this story. Sorry to see it come to a conclusion.

Great read and lovely ending of the tale. Keep up the good work, please! Best regards, Ben

[Small remark about page 2: weather is about meteorology, whether is about choices.]

I had thought the series ended in Scorpio44,so it was a pleasure to find another chapter

I had read the first stories under Scorpio44 and was lookign for something to read tonight and found Scorpio44a. I had to go back and re-read and enjoy a few more of the old chapters before reading this one last chapter. If only I could find love as your characters have. Thank you for your style and gentle way with words. I'll be looking for the next chapter hopefully not a full year away, but sooner.

This story is one of the best on this website, but a person is missing. In chapter 6 or 7, one of the small children by the name of Kate, just disappears. This is irratating. The author ought to be able to keep track of all his charactors and not leave us readers wondering what the hell is going on. I liked the story otherwise, in all aspects.

where it was the found it under a different name - A very good story as usual - but again silly mistakes made with character name changes or they just vanish out of the story - need to keep a print out check list of all characters in your stories then you won't lose them or change identities.

Thanks for this story. Like a good book, I found it difficult to put this down!

You abstractly stated maybe a year until more, it's been 15 mos. Maybe more now? Stay well, and we enjoy your stories.

Will you add a few more chapters to this story, & tell about the young pair in montana.

awsome read im hoping there is more soon keep up the good work i started at the top of your stories and will keep working threw them 2thumbs up

I just spent the entire morning reading the whole story from start to finish. It was like a book you start and can't put down!

I hope you will continue the story and let us see how life has moved on for the entire family.

Appreciated the massage info.

I HAVE REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY. FELL IN LOVE WITH THE CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY. MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!.CAN'T WAIT.IT HAS BEEN OVER TWO YEARS.

I would say reading this was more than worth my time. It's well written, chalked full of interesting characters, loving with scenes of sex and still doesn't come off as being smutty. Which, with a story of this theme, could easily happen. I enjoyed the read immensely and hope that more is told of such an unique adventure

a fantastic story ,couldnt stop reading

Very nice tale of Prince Charming and all his wifes, the story is better than the sex and the sex is nice. Do continue as we all enjoy this rollicking tale of a Navy veteran. This is much better than meeting a girl who is a nymphomaniac with a daddy who owns a liquer store chain... OOOh Rahhhh!!!

with you and your stories. I have been reading your stuff for the last few weeks and love it all. This one in particular. This one has moved me to tears a few times. Please write more. I want to know what happens next for this wonderful loving family.

I have read a lot of storiews but yours are "THE BEST OF THE BEST" I HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE FOR YEARS TO COME. All ot the sieres are real enjoyable.86

Enjoyed the story. A couple things. First you used "weather" instead of "whether" serveral times, including 3 times in one paragraph. Second, you used "Marcie" instead of "Margie" a few times.

For those who are willing to consider the implications and even more so for those willing to take the risks.

I have found it fascinating that much of this has helped me put into words the feelings and behaviors I had been doing for many years. Those of us who grew in the "Hippie" generation listened to the free love - make love not war slogans but they did not get it either. too focused on sex not on giving to others to get for oneself the satisfaction of having given pleasure.

There is little in my life that feels as good as seeing someone else smile because of something I did whether they know I was involved or not.

I HAVE ENJOYED READING THIS STORY OVER & OVER AGAIN. FELL IN LOVED WITH THE CHARTERS IN THIS STORY. I AM ADDICTED TO YOUR STORIES. GOING THREW WITHDRAWAL. PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES SOON!!!!!!

Wonderful if each and every one of us could fine the love, caring and giving of this family you have created. I think for the first time in my life I wish I could have been so lucky to find this kind of love and caring and giving with one wife, let alone with four or five. Communication between people is key in every aspect of life. I've been divorced twice and to this day have never been able to figure out what my women wanted or need because both of them never let me know. They both told me I should know without having to be told about it. Unfortunately I never was able to read their minds.

I have read the whole thing twice, hope you will continue to add to the story. All the chapters were top notch. THANK YOU!!

I really enjoyed reading this story. Please don't stop writing.

It has been almost 5 years .... Please write a few more chapters!

I have been fortunate to read all of your stories. This one captured my heart and I have read the series 3 complete times.

Thank you for sharing all of these stories with us.

It's time for a few more chapters.

Great series . Got a little confusing at the end with too many characters.

Great story keep it going hope you add more to it

Just finished reading this great story, again! Thanks for sharing. Any update?

Very well constructed. Really enjoyed the stpry! Please consider extending.

I know I would like more but if this is the end then I do consider it a great use of my time!

Firstly, from the 2nd chapter, there has been no mention of Susan and Beth and barely any mention of Katherine whereas in the first chapter (3rd page) Della mentions names of 7 children (Jim, Mark, Krystn, Katherine, Susan, Beth and Sam). Why is that?

Secondly, you've used the word "weather" instead of using the word "whether" as in "weather I should do it or not" instead of "whether I should do it or not" and you've used it on multiple occasions.

Thirdly, in the tenth chapter, you've written "Marcie" a few times instead of writing "Margie".

Fourthly, you've written "nekked" rather than "naked" which I know is how some people pronounce the word.

But inconsistencies,improper words and typos aside, the writing is simple and good much like your other stories. The story is well thought out.

Keep going with this story and with your writing. Hope to see the next chapter soon.

That was the nicest use of my time in ages. Thank you.

I do not have a negative comment to make on this story , it kept my interest from the beginning to the end, (hopefully) you will add more chapters to the story as these people grow and family members change , I like how you have included others to the family or to friends of the family. So far I have read many of your stories and have enjoyed most. thank you.

Just the life every man would want. Love, caring and sharing nurture better skills for life and happiness in the long run.

The entire series is a wonderful read. The sex is not so graphic as to be out of place, but enough to allow the story to be true. I highly recommend it!

Loved the story from beginning to CH.10. That was a family that anyone would be happy to be a part of! I am sad that I came to the end, I am going to have to read it again from the beginning!

I loved how it was more about love and connection than sex. Thank you.

Yeah, I think this is a great story even though it is pure fantasy!!

I so enjoy a full story. You have done a wonderful job on Chapter 10. Like you said in you postscript you believe Chapter 10 is the last. My thoughts are this, this whole story is so good you could write for years or just months. Either would be great.

Thank you for taking the time to write this story. Like any “good” fiction the reading was well worth my time and look for more great creations.

As a retired Navy 22 year veteran I know of those long periods of being alone at night when aboard ship at sea. This is such a wonderful story of one of us could or dream about after leaving the Navy. I would love for this go on and on but like a lot of good stories there has to be a ending. Not sure this one is really over but one hopes.

This is in the top 10 of my Literotica storys. I hope you continue them.

Thank you, please continue the saga.

Fantastic job.