All Comments on 'Leif Peeping'

You have captured my interest! This was so well written, I will now turn back to the other two stories shown under your name. I'm certain they will be as entertaining and enjoyable as this one has been. I shall look forward to other entries submitted by you. Keep up the excellent work.

it was not too bad. I'm happy to see you active on Literotica again. I would like to see you do another brother/sister tale.

A well written story, written with love and erotic sex.It really didn't make any difference that they were mother and son, they are just two people in love. Thanks

Thank you for sharing.

You know how to captivate me.My mind was there right with your thought process. very well written. Thank you.

Love how mommy teased baby boy's hot little hole...so nasty, so hot, soooo right!

All the trappings for a great story. Loving mother and son, no father to be cuckolded and a nice, slow buildup to the incestuous union. Thanks and keep writing!

But...I have one quibble.

Part of the growing attraction of between Leif and his Mom is because she sees how masculine and mature her son has become as he's grown into a man. Their relationship and mutual desires, though taboo, seems to grow in a fairly organic, adult way. In my view, this fails to prepare the reader for "mommy" this and "mommy" that as they become intimate. I found that usage incongruous in the context of the rest of the story - it immediately infantilized Leif and detracted from his otherwise appealing, adult character, making him (at least for me), less likable.

I know some really like "mommy" in the context of the m-s sex, but for me, it clashed with the rest of this particular story. That's not to say that it ruined it in any way. I'd knock it back to an "A-" instead of your usual "A" to "A+" work. I still enjoyed it a lot. Good writing is good writing.

What a fantastic story. I just put my mother into the a story and man do I get off. Thx XOXO

But I disagree with the commenter who wrote that Leif calling his mother "mommy" distracts from the story. Sure, Leif's a big strong boy, masculine through and through, and his big stiff prick is symbolic of that. But when he's shoving his big prick up his mother's mommy-hole--that wonderful hole between his mother's legs that he came out of as a little baby--I think it's great that he calls his mother "mommy." It recreates the beautiful, intimate link between mother and her boy, it focuses attention on what the cunt he's pounding to pieces really is. That cunt is his own birth canal, and now Leif's not only back up in it with his big hard cock, but he's going to unload his heavy balls and flood his mommy's twat, his own birth canal, with huge doses of his creamy semen. Up his mother's mommy-twat is where Leif's sperm belongs.

As just a very basic love story of a man and a woman, the lady being about 26 years older than her gentleman love, makes this story of love so awesome in context and actuality that it melts the heart of most readers--this reader in particular. However, when one reads the story in the actual love context of a mother and her son, in almost death throes of carnal, incestual and deep heavenly love, only goes to make this story into a beautiful, heart-felt, magnificant and epic masterpiece. The Maestro has rendered a most masterful, continuous curtain-call of never-ending ovations!!!

The full tenor and emotions of the story were near perfect. The writing is superb and near flawless. The character's played Oscar-winning roles to the hilt, momma Jillian in particular!! The dialogue is most gracius, loving, tender, respectful and just oozing warmth, charm and endless love for each other. The theme and plot are ideal with an awesome setting. And, last but not least, the love, the love scenes, the playful and teasingly, charming foreplay is absolutely magnanamous!!

As an after thought, I do agree with the reader's comment about the inclusion of the finger in the rectum and the anal crapola not being necessary!!! Too many writers do feel in necessary to embellish their stories with shit-wiping cocks and dick enemas, failing to realize most reader's don't care for the unnecessary deviancy.

Very realistic. No stupid superman stuff.A968

loved it-well-written, good characters, nice plot, hot sex thanks

You really should have your stories proof read before submitting them. It was a very good, sexy story, but marred by poor grammar, like.... "Good thing you two got to were here while the sun was out."

Wonderfully sexy (and loving) again. I love your stories and writing style.

Well that was a wonderful read, perfectly paced, great vocabulary and such a thrilling slow build, one of the best mother son stories I’ve read… Many thanks for the pleasure of reading it.

Beautifully written and so erotic that it was extremely difficult to reach the end without exploding!

Thanks!

A really good read. Thank you.