by susypeat
why do These stories where People are bound and left behind still exist? this is dangerous and should never! be tried out.
In another story, a revengeful wife leaves her husband bound to meet a lover. The candles that were burning were knocked over and caught the house on fire. The husband died while still bound. In this case Leila left him bound with no one around. I'll never understand how someone can do this. Fiction story or not. Giving anyone the idea that this is acceptable is still beyond me.
In this case I gave this a 1 star simply for the scene. Stupid woman and more stupid man.
I like your history but I agree also in a relation of dominating and of subjected, never the life of subjected should not be put in danger.
I loved this story. You are an excellent writer, and I look forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it will be kinkier. It reminds me when me and my ex-girlfriend were still dating.
Thank you for your feedback and I understand your concerns about the bondage scene. Actually I almost take them as a compliment since this scene is apparently very real for some people. However it is a fictional story and should be read as one. Personally I enjoy violence in a movie but I do not agree with it in real live at all. I guess it is a question of perception. Do you perceive a story here as a report of real events or something fictional?
Thank you again for all the feedback. Since my email is receive-only, I want to thank everybody who sent me feedback via mail this way.
And they go to the Police. And she suddenly doesn't ever finish her education, spends time in jail and ends up with a criminal record. If she ever has children the fact that she has to register as a sex offender means she can never pick her kids up from school without supervision. How's she looking now? Dumb story.
I like the story line and the characters but I think you need an editor my friend. You are confusing a few times and I have to guess at what you mean like for example when you say contempt you mean content right. Content is being fine with the situation while contempt is hating the situation or person.
Well written. The slightly off grammar reads like an accent. I find that a nice touch. Please continue!
Lobe the story, matches my fantasy perfectly. Please write more.