by thorbet
Thorbet is a heck of a good writer handling the pace, plot, character development with balance and insight. And the sex...zowie!
Wow, Thor!! I wish my Creative Writing students could produce this kind of story. The characterization, the pacing, the details, even the poignancy of calling out her deceased husband's name and the effects it had on the lovers... but most of all the vivid descriptions of sex!! All so truthful and real. I'd love to see more of this kind of story on Lit!