All Comments on 'Len and Masie Ch. 03'

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kalodinkalodinover 13 years ago
Loved it

Thorbet is a heck of a good writer handling the pace, plot, character development with balance and insight. And the sex...zowie!

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderabout 2 years ago

Love all the natural bodies, hair and simple sexual chemistry

CeeCee1954CeeCee1954almost 2 years ago

Wow, Thor!! I wish my Creative Writing students could produce this kind of story. The characterization, the pacing, the details, even the poignancy of calling out her deceased husband's name and the effects it had on the lovers... but most of all the vivid descriptions of sex!! All so truthful and real. I'd love to see more of this kind of story on Lit!

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I am now 75 and have been bi most of my life. My sex drive is still strong although my wife's finished years ago. and I look for satisfaction in other directions now I enjoy writing to stimulate myself and other like minded people. Thanks to those of you who have given me f...

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