All Comments on 'Lena - The Fourth of July'

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keairankeairanover 15 years ago
Damn!

Fucking hot my friend.

toJohnny7toJohnny7over 15 years ago
You're a kinky Mother fucker!

Author has rare quality of getting true passion down on paper.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice very nice

It doesn't get any hotter on a Fourth of July than that. Well written my friend.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Enjoyable

You must finish this story. Too much is left hanging. I enjoyed it

FionaVolpeFionaVolpeover 15 years ago
Daaayummmm...

Hate to be repetitive but that shit was hot! More please.

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