All Comments on 'Leoni's Thrills Ch. 02'

Another nearly flawless story. A few constructive criticisms though: write more, and write more often.

Really like your writing, extreamly arousing. Please don't just leave it here.

Another chapter wil be when...

. . . the way the author kept turning up the heat slowly, but surely, until the explosion at the end. Masterful.

This section with Mare was astonishingly sexy and even if incomplete was my type of story..i.e. I'm left to imagine. Terrific 11pm. What's 12.00hrs like???

This is fucking awesome!

i thought part one was great. u could have taken it a step further...but very, good. thanks.

so soft, subtle. good writing. thank you for that.