All Comments on 'Leoni's Thrills'

I could feel Leoni's desire blossoming, bit by bit. Very erotic.

And I know, you can argue that the seduction is the whole point, but dammit, I want the sex, too! I want a part 2 with Leoni and Samantha…and Leoni and Kelly, and Leoni and her roommate, and Leoni and the hot blonde in the shower—I want to see Leoni as an active, sensuous college lesbian, tasting all the women she can. So, more! (Please?)

One of the best stories I've read in a while.

Tell me, though - what does the "-." in conversation mean?

This is an exquisite piece, porn raised to its highest expression. Congratulations and thanks.

This was really hot - I got real wet! (And maybe I fingered myself and came, too. Maybe. Ok, I did)

Yes, it definitely needs a Part 2.

Love'n'Licks,

kimberlee81

You have a great style i loved all the dialogue, very fucking sexy. I love straight girls getting seduced you did that incredible!!! Need part two very soon..

Thanks for the great story keep it coming!!!

Amazing work, so sensual and erotic... i know what ill be thinking of as i drift of to sleep in the next few minutes... thank you! ~Kat

Interesting and odd that a story that ends when actual physical, sexual activity begins could be one of the most erotic I've ever read. That's quite an achievement for a writer, I'd say.

whoa...that's...

Don't change this. Don't extend it.

whoa.

I love to see new approaches to writing, and this did it nicely. Deliciously erotic, and taking advantage of the beauty of suggestion and subtlety in execution.

I liked the action, teasing, and the sex. Good job!

Her use of assumption of Leoni's next thought...

"Why don't I show you my pussy now. You know, to give you some more material for tonight, when you're thinking of me and fingering yourself."

Just a crafty as hell seduction, a very realistic path to easing someone's sexual tensions. Well done, 11pm!

So few works like this, maybe you also studied behavior and other mind sciences You sure know how to make the readers feel so great.

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Imagery and writing both superb. Not another drop of paint on this canvas. You have an immense capability to paint with words, and I don't believe a visual portrayal could improve the power or effect of this work. Thank you for demonstrating the power of the written word.

Enough said.

Great story, nice build-up and wonderful climax.

Thanks you, 11pm, for this story so full of intimate detail. You have just become my favorite author here!

This is one of those stories I'll remember. Very well done.

this is really good.....i wish they could shoot porn this good. thanks

Trash!