by jill_gates_writer
Wow, two comments - thank you!!!
I publish on Amazon as, well, you can probably guess. I just finished this story and published it yesterday as, Caught Playing, it's 11K words. Not sure what the total word count is here (that's from my ebook writing software, your mileage may vary on the word count if you use a different software).
(If this comment is against the rules, very sorry - won't happen again).
wow what a fantastic very horny story love lesbian chat leads to more.
this was such a hot very exciting story .loved it now i would love more parts .
the writing was awesome do keep them cumming
I loved this story, lesbian chat really turns me on! I love dirty chat with another woman!
Totally enjoyed this fast moving erotic episode. Your vivid writing style enhanced it even more so! Whether this story continues or you embark on other similar ventures, please do so soon. You have a great writing talent for erotica!
Really hot - the build up from discovering chat site to torrid participation could have been stretched out. I could see this being 3 or 4 pages long. The hardest part for me tho were the errors in the narrative mixing up names and height.
Can't wait to move on to part 2.
Although it got a little rough in the end, this was one sexy ride! One turn would be that Carrie was the Chantress! A sequel is so needed, if not a series. Looking forward to enjoying other works of yours, as well.