by jaylicker482
You publish three stories on the same
day and put all of them in the wrong place.
Freinds, seriously? How do you misspell something in the fucking title of the story? Why would I bother to read your story if you cannot even spend the time to check the title?
And I thought all of these stories are edited/looked over by someone before they go live. It's getting harder and harder to find stories that even worth the time to read any more.
I like the story lines. You might want to use spell and grammar check and find an editor to help; some sentences are hard to comprehend.