All Comments on 'Lesson With Best Freinds Dad'

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MaternalyObsessedMaternalyObsessedover 9 years ago
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You publish three stories on the same

day and put all of them in the wrong place.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Didn't even get through the title

Freinds, seriously? How do you misspell something in the fucking title of the story? Why would I bother to read your story if you cannot even spend the time to check the title?

And I thought all of these stories are edited/looked over by someone before they go live. It's getting harder and harder to find stories that even worth the time to read any more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I like the story lines. You might want to use spell and grammar check and find an editor to help; some sentences are hard to comprehend.

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