All Comments on 'Lessons Learned'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Rather liked it

Nice story. Given the misconception on her part I can understand why she never made the first move but what was wrong with him? Shoulda, coulda, woulda done it years ago! (But then there would have been no story!)

Anyway nice. Liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Dude!

I really like the story. It makes sense that she thought he was gay like that, and it makes sense that he didn't want to move in on her right after the rape, and it's just awesome for a gal to read a story about a guy who is caring like that. Now if only you could make him real...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
What I didn't like about it was

it was just too short. I was hoping for 3 or 4 more chapters. Now I'll have to investigate the rest of your writing.

traddisagaintraddisagainover 3 years ago
better

too short and too sweet

MartyMBMartyMBabout 2 years ago

Tell me they got revenge on the rapist? Otherwise, everything happened too fast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

For a good while there I thought it was going to be one of those maddening stories where everything goes to hell because the two MCs refuse to listen to each other and neither one allows the other to finish a sentence uninterrupted, so important things are left unsaid. Fortunately, this pair of dunderheads finally got their shit together to bring about a satisfactory conclusion.

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