All Comments on 'Let Me See It'

by Arkasha

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
This story has something

All a bit quick really like Arkasha's other nice little story but the idea of Mary reaching around yet it is Terri really watching what is going on is rather pleasing. To have developed it with Mary in 'manual' control and Terri giving the instructions would have given it a greater appeal.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Tents?

Their dicks would just fall back down without even touching the front of their pants? What the fuck kind of pants are they wearing, circus tents? My dick isn't huge, it's above average, and I can sit it up. Why? Because pants that fit right don't leave enough space for your schlong to flop around like a fish. I didn't bother reading past that part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Got me hard

Great little story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A sweet treat!

I like how you had him cream outside @Krispy Cream!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Interesting premise.

But it didn't really live up to its potential.

There was Mary jerking him. But we only found out what HE liked about what she was doing on her own. There was nothing from Mary trying different things and asking him which he liked better. Would you like it if I squeezed harder? Softer? Jerked faster? Slower?

What about his balls? Nothing?

Nothing with Mary showing him any of her body parts? Would you like to see my boobs? How do they look? Are they too big? Too small? Would you like to touch tnem? Should I take my bra off? Would you like to take my bra off?

So many opportunities not explored.

Fout stars.

Helen1899Helen1899over 2 years ago

Short and sweet, i love the feel of gossamer like skin as it slides up and down the shaft, I bet Mary's knickers were a little damp, mine always are when i am giving hand job in a car. More like that please

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice premise.

Good beginning. But just a beginning.

Four stars.

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