All Comments on 'Let's Start from the Beginning Ch. 01'

I love the descriptions of the less than perfect body!

I agree, the realistic body shapes add to the story. Great sense of fun and pleasure, love the twist at the end.

Check your tenses at the end; I got a bit confused. If you slip into present to make it more immediate, best to stay there, not go back to past.

Luv this! Is there a chapter 2???

Are we going to get an update soon? Pretty pretty please!!???