by WordsNotDeeds
I loved it. It opened a side of their relationship..consensually..that they both seemed to have an interest in. His concern about pushing too far shows he cares for her. She could've said no at anytime but chose not to..and knew from the beginning what the plan was.
It was well written and I enjoyed it.
this story has the exact mix of lust and love great work kudos. write more
Well written and oh so hot! The end leaves me wanting more for this couple. Please continue :)
Thanks for the great feedback. It's what makes me tick on here!
When I first sat down to begin reading this story, I was waiting for the coffee to finish brewing. I didn't even notice the beeping that let's me know it's ready! Great job on the character development. Not too much and not too little. The story moved along at a perfect pace for me. Thank you for a very well-written, captivating story. I look forward to more!
This was, as the other commenters have already said, quite exceptionally good. Please bring us more like it -- and have five stars with my sincere thanks.
Beautifully written, extremely explicit and very erotic. Keep them cumming.
Best story I've read in several weeks. I was beginning to think that the writers on this WEBsite were losing their ability.
. . .I see this is your first submission. Welcome to the fold!
Terrific in its premise and execution, wonderfully crafted. Made me feel as if I were there! Five stars for sure!