All Comments on 'Lexi Is a True Mother Fucker'

this was pretty gud but too fast. maybe u cud devlope it better by carrying on???

EXCELLENT STORY LEXI IS A TRUE MOTHER FUCKER.

VERY EROTIC STORY ONLY COULD HAVE BEEN LONGER.

DO HOPE THE FOLLOW UP IS CUMMING.

this is written from a REAALLLY bad guy point of view,,,,, and poorly written at that

Love your story.... can't wait to read more. I presume that Lex will eventually turn her mother into her love slave not only fucking her but punishing (spanking) her mother when she is misbehaved. Maybe even some water sports.

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Sure the story was hot, but it was obviously written by a guy who doesn't know how to write. Good luck in future chapters.

You certainly are NOT a good WRITER

Ok, here's the deal. I followed a line given to me by a fellow reader...If you don't like the story that's fine, but be constructive. Also, leave your pen name, b/c I'd love to read your stuff...assuming you write. In addition, don't question my gender in regards to my writing. You don't know me. All in all, don't be an ass because it makes you sound ignorant...be constructive.

I am sorry, the first few lines turned me off, this is clearly a guy, he may have some good stories to tell. But please don't try and 'sell' yourself as a woman. I couldn't get past the first few lines.

Written by a guy or not, the story is still hot, I for one want it to carry on and find out what else goes on. Lexi sounds like a good character, keep it going.

From the start this was a bad story

Excelent, well done...

The dialogue was cheesy. It moved too fast. There really wasn't much detail. It sounds like it wasn't written by a guy, but a fourteen year old. I would recommend taking it more slowly, seduce the mother or if you're going to dominate her, do it in a way where it doesn't move way too fast. Have fun with it, don't rush things.

i have been looking for more mother daughter stories because i licked my mum when i was thirteen. i cant find many and this is perfect