by surrealmadrid
great twist, plot and it was really enjoyable. Make sure there is more to this series or more like this because stories like this are fantastic.
I was fingering myself so hard wen I read this that I was screaming my brother decided to join me...
way too rushed no way in hell would she get over being mad and give in that fast maybe in a few months but not in less than an hour. this isn't a race slow down and make it believable and devolope the plot and charicters feelings. this needs a total rewrite and a good editor.
DBRS
It was a good start to a story; but, it ended too abruptly. I hope there is a part 2.