All Comments on 'Libby & John: First Time Ch. 02'

great sex... tremendous characters... does John have to be so stiff though....(it does add so much to the tension)... A fabulous piece of writing.... both chapters.... am hoping for a chapter 3.... Thanks

if john was surprised that he wanted to see someone else's hand touch libby, i was doubly suprised! i'm glad you narrated afterwards that he'd probably kill anyone whoever does that, LOL. really romantic & hot. love this as usual. i hope you keep them together forver.

I loved the first one and this one is equally fantastic!

Oh, the passion !

Damned good writing; wish I could do it.

HP

Well written and great detail.

Thank you

HP

I love this story, very romantic and sexy and the way life should be between two people - please keep this story line with John and Libby going. I like seeing how a nice relationship like this continues. Thanks for writing this!

You have the gift of writing. Your stories are so realistic. Thank you and i hope you'll keep adding new ones.

The author has a way with words, and it shows in second chapter of this excellent love story. In addition to wonderful character development, there is here plenty of passion, emotion, and love that are all part of a plot that fully engages the reader from start to finish.