All Comments on 'Libby'

THIS is erotic? In any sense of the word? Come on webmasters PUT this shit in the right category/ The NON-erotic category would be the best. Or BDSM or FETISH.

she wakes up and it was all a dream, otherwise too far-fetched to be an enjoyable read, better luck on your next effort

he will lick your pussy till is start smelling like dog ass it self, you will be happy. ha ha, most stretched story ever read. but agian you never wrote any good ever. Just as your standard

why so many put you down ....sounds like the same guy...anyway enjoyed the read ...who said fiction has to be true...and in fact some truth is to hard to believe.

far fetched it may be, but its a story, and in a story anything can take place. I for one thoughly enjoyed it. thanks Murf

horrific slut.

Far fetched, foolish, wimpy as shit, and lame, I couldn't even get halfway past the firsrt page it was so pathetic.

and fantasy. Holding back my disbelief that Dan, Lance, etc. could or would be as written was difficult. At the end I found the effort wasn't worth it. I gave the story a four, because I feel really generous today.

Not great, but definitely not bad.

I agree that it's sort of far fetched, but a lot of erotic/smut stories are. It's just silly fun.

There are stories out there that we find really compelling as well as erotic, and there are some that are just dirty fun. This, I think, is in the second category.

I think, though, that this one belongs in "Loving Wives," since it revolves mainly around quirky takes on marriage, involving the experiences of at least two adventurous wives.

Keep at it, Murphy - we'll keep reading.

As for the personal attacks - I think "wondering" got it right: it's mostly just one or two whose enjoyment of the site consists in finding things to be ugly about.

And who's to fault them? It's sort of a fetish with them, and they're entitled to get off whether it makes sense to us or not, right?

What can I say..Pathetic is all I can manage. This writer hopefully is female, I can`t a see a real man writing about his wife being fucked by others or by women walking all over him. It does not even work as fiction.

while wielding absolutes, TK U MLJ LV NV

This work of fiction made no sense with regard to real life and genuine emotions. But, if living as a slut for one and the other as fuckin' sexual bully is satisfying ... Well, they need professional help and soon!

Murphy you are one very sick Fucker.

I was in the mood for something trashy, campy and shamelessly over the top. This scratched that itch and then some with even a happy ending (of sorts).

Dan recognized her right away. He escorted her from his office into his bosses office and explained why he couldn't work with her. You see, Dan had grown a pair of balls. To do what he did in the hedge fund business, you needed to have them -balls that is. So she continued on by herself - alone. Nice that she remembered her Mother and brothers and helped them out. Oh wait! The bitch didn't help anyone but herself right? That's why Dan remembered her and wouldn't have anything to do with her. Once again, a story with thoroughly disgusting characters that was impossible to like in any way, shape or form. You have become one of the worst authors on this site to go along with Samuelx and Edrider73. Glad you stopped posting.

No ryhme or reason as to the "plot"? If there is one?

What a nasty manipulative narcissistic bitch.

Another cuck story, skimmed it only, another stupid theme

Fuck the author loves these ball breaking manipulative bitches.

What a delightful, escapable, HOT, HOT, HOT fantasy. I LUUUUVVED it. The only problem is that I’m jealous of the three of them. Well done!