All Comments on 'Life after Death Ch. 12'

EG,

This is a very good next chapter so I can't wait for the next one. Glad you are able to continue now. Good Luck!

EG:

You expressed a fear that because of the time delay something may have been lost in ch. 12. Fear not. You've told a fine tale from the beginning and it carried on in ch. 12. By the way, welcome back old son. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Thanks for a very nice job. Sorry to hear of your loss.

Hope that you come back to us.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Good mix of story line and sex unlike most on this site.

You could do with an editor or proof reader to eliminate some grammatic and other mistakes. But I still really enjoyed this.

This was a great story! The only issues I have are that you would write "me" instead of "she", or "my" instead of "her" which made the story very disjointed in parts! As you would have to stop and re read it to figure out who you were talking about! It was very bad in one of the earlier chapters!

Thanks for this great story. Hope everything is going ok for you now.

All the best!

Thank for you, I wish you all the best, it takes time, how much is up to each person,my self just short of a year, will likely take an other couple, to feel I might of made it back to the light. Know you are a valued author to this reader.

North

Sorry I can not vote again, but know I would give you more than five stars if I could, thank you for your efforts and sharing, It was better reading for me the second and third times.

NorthPacific

I enjoyed your heartfelt story, Thank you

Loved the story. Great interaction between the characters. 5* Thanks for your time and imagination.