by bluedragonauthor
you must include tiffany and make it a foursome. would be incredibly hot.
Will Saya move in with Lauren? Will this guy lose these horny chicks? Will Lauren give everybody an std? I hope so. Your a good writer, but in this day and age, even porn stars use rubbers. Unless they have a death wish.
amazing second chapter!
as usual...youre getting better with every chapter that you put in...
Your writing is very good and your treatment of the plot is also so very well drawn out. Your characters do come alive through your dialogue. Looking forward to your next chapter.
If allowed I’ll comment on your story at the end of this series.
All in all very good.