All Comments on 'Life as an Adult Day 01'

Please get an editor. Your story is great, but there are some terrible mistakes made. For example, "your awake" should be "you're awake," and "sound queues" should be "sound cues."

Good storyline, just seek an editor.

Please keep going. I am loving this story!!!

Very good. I do hope there is more because this was very well written story.

Great comment from the other anonymous.

Hi